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Dear Ms. Swainsforth:
I am a registered engineer in the state of Michigan, and I am presently seeking a position in the roofing industry. A copy of my resume is enclosed, and I would like to talk with you should you have an appropriate opportunity for me at Kelco Corporation.
My most recent assignment was to manage projects at Forte Products Company to develop products for the commercial roofing industry. Part of my responsibility was to provide technical support to sales people, when they had questions of a technical nature from theirengineering or architectural customers.
I have experience in quality assurance and the application of control charting to a large insulation line at Forte Products. This resulted in a 23% reduction in scrap and a 76% reduction in customer complaints.
I am seeking a position as a team leader or manager in product or process development, or in quality assurance. My compensation requirements are in the $65,000 to $70,000 range, and I am open to relocation.
I would welcome the opportunity to talk with you and discuss the technical contributions I could make to the Kelco Corporation, especially in the development of exciting new roofing products.
Thank you for reviewing my credentials, and I look forward to hearing from you shortly.
Sincerely, James C. Willison
James C. Willison
Enclosure
求職信的結(jié)尾用語，可以參考下列句子：
A：(1)軟弱、羞怯的： If you think I can fill the position after you have read my letter, I shall be glad to talk with you. 讀完此信后若您認(rèn)為我還可以，我愿意和你談一談。
(2)改寫后(較佳)： If my application has convinced you of my ability to satisfy you, I should welcome the opportunity to talk with you, so that you may judge my personal qualifications further.
B:(1)懷疑，不妥、不安全的： If youre interested, let me know immediately, as Im sure and interview will convince you Im the man for the job. 如果貴公司有興趣，請與我聯(lián)系，我認(rèn)為與您面談后可以使您相信，我可以勝任這份工作。
(2)改寫后： May I have an interview? You can reach me by telephone at Beijing 123456 between the hours of 7-9 a.m. and 5:30-9:30p.m. any evening. 我們可以面談嗎?可在每天上午七至九點(diǎn)，下午五點(diǎn)半至九點(diǎn)與我電話聯(lián)系,號碼：123456。
C：陳腐的句子： Hoping you will give me an interview, I am……(我希望與您面談) Anticipating a favorable decision, I wait your……(等候您的佳音) Trusting your reply will be satisfactory, I remain(靜候滿意的答復(fù))
D：哀求式的句子，不夠完整(漏掉面談時(shí)間)： Wont you please give me the chance to interview your? I can be reached by calling Beijing 12345678.請給我一個面試機(jī)會，聯(lián)系電話12345678.
改寫后： May I have the opportunity to discuss this matter further with you? My telephone is Beijing 12345678. You can reach me between nine and five oclock during the day. 能不能與您面談以便進(jìn)一步商討?我的電話是12345678。我從上午九點(diǎn)到下午五點(diǎn)都比較方便。
E：太過自信的句子： I am quite certain that an interview will substantiate my statements Between two and four every afternoon except Tuesday you can reach me by telephoning 12345678. 我深信面談可以證實(shí)我的話。您可在每天下午二至四點(diǎn)(星期二例外)打電話12345678通知我。
F：較具體有效的句子。 May I have an interview? My residence telephone is (010) 12345678. You reach me by calling that number until June 30. After July 2, my address will be XXXX, XXXX Street, XXXX District. 能否給我一個面試機(jī)會?我的住宅電話為12345678。六月三十日以前我都在此處，七月二日以后，我的新址為xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx。